Short but it tells it all.

Short and very effective, you describe love perfectly. Well Done.

Keep it up

Thanks for reviewing.

While not as long as my own poem named Love, a short piece that certainly makes a good point. Though 'resistance is futile' seems distinctly overused in lierature, from my perspectve. Overall, well wrote

very eloquently done; well put with few words. I can't do that sort of thing.Nice use of words to convey the concept (which by the way I agree with) very very cool.

Wow, I don't think I've ever actually read anything so short that has such a powerful impact. This is so true and written in a fantastic unique way. Well done.

Short but simple, nicely done. I like how you've made it a sort of nice feeling but then there's that pain that comes along with it.

Can't wait to read more from you!

Luv, S. A. Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

So simplae adn straightforward...but this is love...good job and thanks 4 da reviews^_^

That's a really great way to describe the feeling. But I think that it's different for every one. Which is why love is so easy to write and talk about.

I like how you described love. It can be hard to describe, but you did a great job with it.