cool, like karla said.. the imagery is great... ! nice job.. great poem, keep up the good writings

An interesting point of view, although rhetorical questions a tad overused. Not bad on the whole, though.

WOW, that was the first thing that entered my mind. the imagery was incredible. i enjoyed it very much... i am also humbled by what you said one msn today, thank you, it means a lot to me.