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Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 8
Are you gonns write more? I really like it, how none of these seem to have anything to do with one another, save for the fact that they deal with strong emotions. Good job.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 7
I sound like a broken record, but i think good stories deserve a review on every chapter. Great work.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 6
Sucks for him, but i guess he kinda deserved it, ya know, for killing the poor wolf. Still I feel bad for him.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 5
Yikes. Reminds me of a time my sister's ex put a gun to her head. . .anyway, that has nothing to do with this. Great descriptions once again.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 4
It's not like I haven't said this before, but that was beautiful.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 3
Cute, I was kind of shocked at the contrast between the first two and this one. Your descriptions are amazing.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 2
Depressing, but very well written.
Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
That was a really cool idea, using the seven deadly vices and turning them into people. I like it.
arcferrier 2007-08-25 . chapter 1
Hello Melly! Guess who this is? xD

Your stories are so col. Hahaha. The title is just nice. No need to change lol.
saints-refulgent 2005-09-06 . chapter 1
heyy melly! (: well, nice one. i liked it! rather original and say, did you actually write this for the compo on Green? if so, this essay should be named GREEN (how original, *cough*)

keep writing! and i can't believe you deleted all the rest. gah!
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