 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 8Are you gonns write more? I really like it, how none of these seem to have anything to do with one another, save for the fact that they deal with strong emotions. Good job. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 7I sound like a broken record, but i think good stories deserve a review on every chapter. Great work. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 6Sucks for him, but i guess he kinda deserved it, ya know, for killing the poor wolf. Still I feel bad for him. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 5Yikes. Reminds me of a time my sister's ex put a gun to her head. . .anyway, that has nothing to do with this. Great descriptions once again. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 4It's not like I haven't said this before, but that was beautiful. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 3Cute, I was kind of shocked at the contrast between the first two and this one. Your descriptions are amazing. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 2Depressing, but very well written. |
 Siren Xenophon 2007-11-05 . chapter 1That was a really cool idea, using the seven deadly vices and turning them into people. I like it. |
 arcferrier 2007-08-25 . chapter 1Hello Melly! Guess who this is? xD
Your stories are so col. Hahaha. The title is just nice. No need to change lol. |
 saints-refulgent 2005-09-06 . chapter 1heyy melly! (: well, nice one. i liked it! rather original and say, did you actually write this for the compo on Green? if so, this essay should be named GREEN (how original, *cough*)
keep writing! and i can't believe you deleted all the rest. gah! |