|Reviews for Labor Day on Vashon Island|
| KwazyKandyPie 9/19/05 . chapter 1
long, but still great. what can i say? your poems are always great.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| AlwaysAmberella 9/17/05 . chapter 1
wow, This is so personal, I can't help but see everything you described in my mind eye.
Well, Well, Well Done!
| Tikklz 9/14/05 . chapter 1
I loved this is so many different ways! My own "dad issues" came into play, the need to break away and go "hunting adventure". Also, I went to visit my aunt and uncle last year, and they live in Anacortes, WA (about a 45 min. trip from Seattle) and I don't think there has ever been a place I've been more attached to, and reading this made me miss the ocean SO much! As always, you're writing style astounds me!
| Neverlander12 9/9/05 . chapter 1
It could be a song. It doesn't even need music though really. It's so melodic and touching. I really felt the emotion. It's a little hard to describe, it's like that choked up feeling in the back of your throat, but inside my very soul. Very well written. Keep up the good work!
| shade 9/7/05 . chapter 1
My my my, I really liked that for the sheer fact I could relate. My grandparents used to live on Vashon and I'd visit them and it'd always be great. Don't want to ramble. Very good.
| pale doll 9/7/05 . chapter 1
It's Jack Dawson...
| like a lover 9/7/05 . chapter 1
I loved how I could see the events, how I could imagine the relationship strengthening throughout the day (bad choice of words, but you know).
| elvenstorm 9/7/05 . chapter 1
This is very story like, can picture it well. Love the sentiments and ideas in it. Well done.
| Kurt Nabokov 9/7/05 . chapter 1
Thanks for the review. I'd appreciate if you'd read my fiction more than my poetry; I try much harder at it. I liked your poem: it's nice to actually read something on this site that actually has some thought.
| Steel Winged Angel 9/6/05 . chapter 1
wow...a story in poem form. Almost like prose. I like the () you use throughout, as though adding on to the thought. I could really picture this. Beautiful
| Traced In Green 9/6/05 . chapter 1
That's a beautiful poem, excellent style and a deep relationship portrayed. It's a tad bit sad on the dad part. Thank you for your reviews and I'm so sorry.
| words music and love stay true 9/6/05 . chapter 1
ooh! This poem is really really good! It's incredibly powerful! It almost brought me to tears it was so good! I love it! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! *shivers* the emotional power! Ooh! I love it! *****the scottish dragon*****
| backseats on thursdays 9/6/05 . chapter 1
amazing. simply. amazing. keep it up keep it up!
| method acting 9/6/05 . chapter 1
A different sort of beauty. off beat...interesting. Lovely job.
| SeaVoi 9/6/05 . chapter 1
Thats a nice poem. But a Corolla! Come On!