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| sarah1491 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI love it! :) I enjoy reading haiku. :) |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 20, | abuseBe still my soul... be in the moment that you never had... thank you for writing these. Tomorrow I'll think of these reviews and I'll be ashamed. I'll call myself stupid, how I made myself look like a fool. I'll hate myself and see how immature I was. But you gave me a moment... and thank you for giving me a reason to hate myself tomorrow... Ellen, I'm too morbid.. I should just go to sleep, sleep makes it all okay again. It fixes me until tomorrow... Goodnight Elaine. |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 19, | abusedear God,how I wish you weren't a lie. I hate you because you made heaven and hell. In my heart there is no good or evil, I'm just trying to get by... Sincerely your's God,Ellen |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 17, | abusedamn hope... iB |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 14, | abuse"- your face is laughing... but your eyes... they're not laughing... why?" Girl I dreamt about, E |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 12, | abuseThis one was wonderful. we exist.. sometimes... I don't know if I can make it through all of these... I'll stop reviewing each one and leave one review at the end... if I can make it before the feeling of wanting to cry overcomes me... Pseudo-Ellen |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 11, | abuseWishing perhaps? Ellen is alone and scared (I unconsicouly typed out 'axed' while I wasn't looking, it disturbed me...) and she needs a hug and not be afraid to return it... I hope it never stops raining... I hope millions of people drown... I hope hundreds of cities are flooded... because I want to go swimming... now. EiB |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 10, | abuseChoppy, but good. I wish I could see the magic in all the cards that people hold. Wish I were a better person... I want to shout... Ignore these reviews if they seem crazy, I'm getting mixed up emotions again... I'm sorry... I should have stopped and read it another time... sorry for wasting these reviews... Ei... |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 9, | abusewish I could... EiB |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 8, | abuseThis one evoked no emotion... hm... sorry. EiB |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 7, | abuseIt's about love. Bites that leave marks in the skin... they fade, love fades... love dies... and we never really had anything other than our solitude... It's amazing, there are six billion people on the planet who live on less than 25% of the land... and still, still... there are those of us who are alone. |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 6, | abusei like this, (zepplin forever) I wish I had a reason... god, I'm so melodramatic right now...It's not every day that someone gives me twenty chances to try and say something smart. I like these so far, going good, looking forward to a spectacluar ending. EiB |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 5, | abuseHow long have I wanted to do that... I wonder though, do you feel the pain of your head snapping back and all your bones breaking, or is it just... all over? I wonder... I wish I had the guts to do something like that... instead I'm cursed to live out my time here on earth... -every moment here is one moment I'm missing, with you, together, in eternity...- |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 4, | abusesmile bigger. :) Down the road more frequently traveled: "Tresspassers will be offered a shot" EiB |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-05-17 ch 3, | abuseI smiled a little, the corner of my mouth turned up... how big does it have to be to be a smile? Lost I drfited... do they always come? EiB |