I'm not too keen on the way you ended the poem, but otherwise, you did a great job on it.10/10

'On a list of tasks as long as Hercules'...'Lucky losses in the sand'...Those were superb lines. An excellent poem, do write on.

I like when you first put: "Jack's in his box/The mad hatter’s gone for tea." I like that line. I hated going back to school too esp. high school. Hopefully now it will be better since I am in college.

Thank you for reviewing my story!

I thought that was interesting, though i'm not sure if you did this statement -> 'I'm i worthy' on purpose or made an error...is it meant to be 'am i worthy?' or 'i'm i worthy' which kinda doesn't make sense completely...

well good work :)