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eighteen hundred 2005-09-06 . chapter 1
This was pretty good. It was interesting that you had Love asking a question about love, which is idea you could elaborate upon, if you felt like. Love's speech didn't really seem to fit the rest of the piece; if you were trying to emphasize something about it in particular, you might want to overstate it just a bit more to make it more obvious. But in general, a pretty good piece.
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