god, amazing. so desperate & lonely. the formatting really breaks it up - gorgeous. AH sensory overload :P

wow. relatable. perfec.t beautiful.

i adore this. the image of bottling missed opportunities is so lovely... i relate, which is a lame thing to say in a review, but it's true.

awesome.. especially the ending.. amazing format (as always)

Once again amazingly clever. The third line seems a bit strange, if only because you haven't split the words according to the syllables, though I'm sure there's a good reason for that; every other part of your poems are closely calculated.

Matt

Pretty good. I like the "Just for that..." stanza; nice piece.

can I catch every missed opportunity, bottle it and p o u r them out to you now?-Love that line.

Juliet.