I see bedtime eyes... for some reason. Not quite sure what that's supposed to mean, but ah well. Take it as you like. Nice job on this. Short but profound.

wonderful wonderful wonderful. the simplicity is stunning & equally effective. i'd add this to faves, but i'm out of space =(

short, serene, with all your usual class.

wow.bitter.it is short but effective,i really love it.write on.

E.Ebony

very cool first line.. awesome poem

I love this! Something about it, despite its simplicity, makes it oh-so lovely. The ending is perfect.

You work has such a strong signature to it; it really comes alive before your eyes.

Juliet.