Hey it's me! Kiorra! You know, your Head Girl? I like the poem! I can't explain what it makes me feel, because I can't fit it into words. But just keep up the good work!

TRIPLE WOW WOW WOW! I HAVE NEVER READ ANY POEMS IN MY LIFE THAT I LIKE ANYWHERE EVEN CLOSE TO YOURS. YOUR TALENT FOR WRITING STORIES AND POEMS AMAZES ME BIG TIME. LOVE YA

hello and welcome! lol... this is pretty good, although i'm not to keen on capitlizing all the first letters of the words...it ruins the flow a little and makes it seem like a poem of titles. but then this just could be your signature style. anyway thats just me..it's very lyrical and easygoing. keep it up.- the lady Elaine

I enjoyed it; the only thing that I would say is that every word is capitalized which was kind of distracting. But other then that I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.