The ending is very kool. I like the rest, but it is very sad... maybe that's why it's under angst? (sorry, I'm blonde)It's almost like Hello (Evanescence -or however you spell it-) and I love Hello! soo sweet. but I'm drifting. this is very cool!

It's all very abstract. Somewhat difficult for me to grasp the basic idea without reading several times. But it's beautiful... you can see the imagery loosely worked without draging about too many words.