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Shadow of Oblivion013 2005-11-13 . chapter 1
"I cannot stand all I feel-/ I am not a girl of steel./ Go on, stretch me, soon you will see./ See how much this is hurting me." my favorite part of this poem. i liked the chorus of this, and how you made it different each time. job well done. k/w

in memory,~shadow
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