You might get bored of me coz I'm going to review ALL of your work! It's really deep and from the heart. I like it!

that's exactly how i feel, the other day i sat in somebody's seat at lunch and got treated horribly cuz i sat there, its so stupid but yet its just..so stupid

keep up the excelente work!

Very well said. And can be saw in many views, not just one view of phyiscal pain. And it shows that. Very well said, loved it.

nice work. i been there was there to day and all i want to do is kill someone. keep writing

really good!keep it up!

make sure at the end you add your question mark or period.

but in all very good!

The short lines worked really well in this, un bringing out the pain. Beautiful job.