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FunkyFlower17 2005-09-08 . chapter 1
beautiful. um...kinda unnerving, this cant be true obviously cuz ur not dead...i hope. no, of course not! anyway, i will just comment on the poem ad stick to the less confusing subjects. i LOVE the theme in this tho it seems that at the beginning the person has committed suicide or taken drugs or summit to kill themselves whereas at the end, they're cursing god. thats the confusing bit but otherwise, i love the poem. its definitely going on my fav list cuz of the writing style and topic. beautiful, great job:-)
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