I've actually encountered this vary kind of thing, so I found I could relate to this poem quite a bit. It's true that others can make the outcome very bleak.Remy/The Blind Guardian

very sweet sotry.. sad poem.. very cool & unique I like it a lot

truly amazing. :) loved it. keep writing.

Makes me think of people who want help and pity and such, then get mad because you never helped when they never told you in the first place... gotta leave some clues out in the open, right? anyway, very nice job.

Wow, that was so good. The flow and rhyming were great. I can relate to this...it's weird how you can try so hard to be noticed and no one does...Anyway, great job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)