whoa...that was thought-provoking, is the word that first comes to mind. Interesting. I read some other stories of yours and I've liked them all. You're a very good writer. :)

That... That was just sheer, unadulturated genious. Every fact, every detail, and, expecially, your climatic conclusion. I do not think much of your storytelling skills, but the message that you conveyed with what you have is one of genious. I applaud you generously, and wish you luck should you pursue writing as a hobby or career.

Funny little story you have here. Talk about sketching gone insane.