This was very deep and extremely poetic. It has extremely mature content and that's just awesome. Excellent job! This is by far one of your bests! Keep this up! You should be proud. The ending was fabulous. Nothing to be ashamed of! Keep it up!

wow, that was realy heart felt and i liked the metaphore for the little girl with the niad and farie. ur right, i count my self lucky that i've never had to endure thatand i'll never inflict it. good poem