I really like the line "struggling to hold on"

Wow. The imagery is so pretty. I love the meaning and symbolism of this poem as well. I can really relate to this. I love the ending too. Great piece.

Beautiful language and meaning. I liked it.

Yes! I love the multiple haiku! And you can actually write them!

Interesting concept. I would suggest developing the purpose of the tree a little more clearly, but other than that little abstraction this piece was very creative and full of feeling. Nicely done.

You are so so lucky to be doing a creative writing course, it's something I really want to do. This poem is beautiful, great imagery and wording. I like it a lot. QueenVixta

that is very nice, i haven't read many haikus, but this is one of the best. keep writing ) chey

Beautiful and lovely, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.