another awesome piece. you really rock.

A very sensual and romantic poem. Beautifully written.

~~Trinity

wow for as young as you are you have such a gift with words. i wish i had that when i was younger. you are going to be an amazing author.

This is really sweet, and the imagery is beautiful. I like the idea of sharing secrets with the grass and the sky...it brings nice mental images to mind. I adore the line 'your crimson heart that mine is entwined with'! You have a very lyrical(hope it's spelled right) sound to your poem, which rocks. One thing, though: The line 'For they are with the ears of no one ever before'. IT might sound better if you put the word 'have' in place of 'are with'. The way you said it may seem prettier, but when you think about it, it's not really correct. Just a little thingy, though. I think it was great! It really describes that feeling you get when you're in love, and an inability to tell anyone. Beautiful!!Blessed be!!

Don't wait. Act. Trust me, good or bad it is better to know the ansewer than merely be afraid of it. And if you need someone to tell about a secret love, tell your readers :P

Later...

beautiful, heartfelt... v. nice. i like it. one thing though: it doesn't flow very well when you have a comma at the end of every line. if you have punctuation, make sure to have a period in there somewhere; otherwise, it's just one big run-on sentence. other than that, good job!