Silly Connor. I'd hug you if you wouldn't beat me over the head. haha What happened to me then? Am I unsaveable? ...If thats it...I dont want to be saved. Least of all from you.

Write to me...I miss not hearing from you...I'll send you my address in case you lost it.

Hi, you reviewed my intro and thank you for making it SO productive and SO long and SO mean! And great poem, except for the vocabulary! ahh... nvm

This, I really enjoyed. The lamentation comes across as authentic, and that's pretty much the highest praise available for this kind of poetry. Very good. I like the loose but purposeful style of the verse. Well done, well done.

This is *very* well done. I love the words that you use, they all feel so perfect for this poem, if that makes any sense. Excellent job on this! And thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it.

*sniff* that was so emotional... i loved it. by the way thank you for your review and i will take your addvise. i think you have alot of talent writting angst poetry and i hope i can read one of your stories soon. goodluck!

guh... i didn't really get it as well as i think i should've?... but it sounded pretty good! I think... wait... let me read again... *blank blank...* ya... sounds good, but i still don't really understand it as well as I should...

Ooh, great work! Pleasurably depressing with intelligence and reason.

With all due respect,

Faerie Energy

I Save Myself From You. Seriously, though. You idiot.

Well let us see why I won't flame that much, but just for the EFFECT and the sake of ranting I will just say what the hell were you thinking? Ok I saw the review you posted on fairyprincess-what's-her-name but you could've been nicer to me. And of course I was right. YOU DIDN'T EVEN READ HER STORY and you posted a review! Jeez, if there were more people like you I would go mad.

Besides, you said that "my story sucks ass". You argued against HER flaming me and instead you flamed me without knowing it. What the hell? Well you didn't really say that, but you implied it. You said "his failing attempts at writing" and you were addressing me. I do not fail at anything especially WRITING & ENGLISH! I'll have you know I have a 113 percent in English this year and I rock at it, ok? So please try to keep your snide and overobsessive, provocative, and unnecessary comments to yourself.

Thank you, that is all I have to say. I saved myself from you. (LAUGHS...LOL)

Anyway, the poem in itself is good except you used the word "I" a little bit more often that I would've liked; try to be a bit more creative and use more words. Maybe you can subsitute "me", "my", "myself" or something else for "I". 'I' sounds a bit bland and try to get out using stupid words. Just to be concise or laconic do not use 'I' for everything. We KNOW it is YOU narrating the story, so you don't have to say it again. You're being repititive. Stop it.

OTher than that I would say Good descriptions. Guess that's almost the only comment I have given throughout this review, so...whatever. GOod description, yeah.

"feel the air compress around me" yeah that is cool I could feel that.

"My walls keep growing" sweet I could see that. Like witnessing a plant growing, yeah. Like that anyway. A metaphor/simile? Never mind

"I feel my mind cave in" yeah cool like there is something pushing against your mind and it gets smaller and more dented and...whatever you get the picture.

So like I said...OVERALL nice job though you could've done better, but you just didn't give your entire effort. But good nevertheless. Not one of your best works, but not one of your worst either.

P.S Your story Behemoth is just as sucky as my story Curse of Magic. Ok? Just want to make that clear in case you decide to be narcissistic or egotistical...no offense. Right?

X-Eragon-X

Kind of reminds me of Pink Floyd's "The Wall", but a lot shorter.

I am not a poet by any stretch of the imagination. So, don't take too much I have to say to heart, although none of it is bad.

I like the repetition of the black walls, and I like how you have circled the beginning bit at the end. I have very similar feelings often.

Beautiful piece. Well written, evocative yet calming.

Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig

"The black walls that save me from boring you Or having you forget me" Oh, I like that. This is so rich and full of emotion- I can feel your pain. (Oh how cliche is that?!) Seriously, though, you present it really well. Awesome work, keep it up!

You and I, we've got lots of things in common. It's almost the same things we feel inside, but different people have different ways of showing it. And yours come in the form of this piece of poetry. Like it! Oh yeah, and thanks 4 the reviews...hehe.

I went through something simlar when I was going to move. and it basically shut down my whole life for 3 years. and then I didn't know how to really comonuicate with people (I still get stuck, the ball walls never really go away; for me at leased)I understand your poem. you wrote it really well.

very nice. very deep. very you. A

Hey Thanx for my review... replying

I can relate to this poem.. i moved about a year ago and it hit me really hard. So i like it :)Now you spoke about my book taste so im going to delve into yours! I havnt yet read the ragwitch but shade's children was quite good, and yes i read 'the creature in the case' was a bit disappointed as it still didnt answer that many questions *sighs* But ne way! Enjoy.. oh and i recently did 'the tyger' by blake for an a level essay...