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| NinjaStoryteller 2006-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseHaha... eerie indeed. And indeed again, he will not cry anymore. Perfect title. |
| Enigmatic Margaret 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseHaha in a very creepy way this is funny. Nice one. |
| K. T. Marie 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseo, that's just... 'laughs-in-that-nervous-sort-of-way-and-then-creeps-away-very-carefully' |
| Wopaloplopyop 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAt first when I read it, I laughed out loud. Then I thought, wait, that's kinda creepy... it a sick, twisted, sort of way... |
| beinedhiel 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseoh freaky... and of course it's up to our own twisted minds to decide what really happened... awesome! |
| McQuinn 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseOoh. A little "Twilight Zone"-ish. This is very interesting - it looks to me like the words are spoken by a child, because, first of all, the title is "The Bestest Cure," and the speaker regards the mother as "mom." I like this. The (lack) of capitolization of "Cure" in the title kind of bothers me, though, but that's me being neurotic. -McQuinn |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abusehow you leave the rest to the imagination is pretty creepy. I like the format, and the way you say so much in such a concise, quick way. Kewl piece. |
| Mikki Amboree 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuse*jaw drop* Whoa... :O Just whoa... I think I have an idea of what happened... and it's creepy... *hides in corner* Very interesting poem... very interesting... |
| les petits bateaux 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing and a little creepy too. I like the way you created a whole plot of a story with just three lines. Good job. |
| Spare Change 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseBravo! This is more strange than scary, in my opinion, but this sort of strange takes a lot of skill to pull off. :) Great job. Still trying to figure out whether the baby is dead or not. Haha. |
| poet tree 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just...wow. Eerie, yet wonderful. Do you realize this is in haiku format? I like it. |
| Eirien 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abuse*lol* Creepy but a bit funny too. I like it somehow. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuse...wow. |
| sunday night sky 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseomg... i have no words... but this is great |
| candyaddict 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abusethat felt like a slap in the face for me. Not quite sure why. It made me think of one of my friends, who's always blaming herself for everything. This haiky triggered some pretty ** emotions.. |