Awesome! You told a story AND gave a definition to that which I'd believed cannot be defined. And throughout the whole piece, it's always suggesting this unconditional caring; the tale of the little boy and girl was touching, and it snagged a heartstring or two. I love the way you had your pattern going between the boy and the girl's sides on each stanza, just the whole thing was great. Good work, this one's going in my Favorites. ^.^

oh my GOD!I LOVE THIS! man, this is great! please keep up the good work!

oh i really like this :D it's gorgeous, the whole buildup into the final elopement, the story of the romance between the two, like their life together. i just love this.

This is a very beautfil poem. And what I love about this poem is you illustrate through events and situations on the theme that ou are trying to prove. This one is very sharp and creative. Good job, thnx for sharing.