oh i like this one, fits a profile of a tattoo and everything

(i read this one first considering i just got a tattoo so i thought it would be a interesting quincidence)

-Dylan

This is an amazing poem. I've felt like this SO many times. Good job!

Wow, that's really.. a depressing poem. The writing style is good, the emotions are displayed well, but-I dunno, the topic is just very deflating. Of course we write from personal experience and many of my poems are sad too. It's just that the idea of this one (especially from the repeated words) comes across as "crazy, sick, pain", and it makes me wonder what happened to make you write it. :(

My one suggestion as far as writing content: "Going crazy from anticipation - Going crazy from over-played memories" That doesn't sounds right grammatically. Maybe substituting the word "with" instead of "from" in both lines?

Take care.

Powerful and passionate.

Juliet.

Hey there lovely.

I'm really astounded at your poetry, i knew you were a writer but i didnt know you were THIS good... hah. Blows me away.

much love

--Naomi

hearts

Powerful and emotional. I love the imagery of 'It grinds into your skin like a tattoo'. Very interesting poem, it gives me something to ponder.

Ooh, very strong and to-the-point, love. I enjoyed it very much. I'm sorry you feel that way, though... Me wonders what it's about! ...Anyway, I did enjoy it. :) Intense and all that moochy happiness! To thee I bid thy a 'bye, O my sister droog! I viddy we shall meet a nother time, and I shall keep my glazzies out for thy.

. marie

Awesome! I love this. Really nicely done. It gives its point, but leaves a bit to wonder about.

Excellent!