I love the contrast in this piece, between the Spring represented by the dresses and the sadness of the narrator. Despite the seeming simplicity of your narrator, you've managed to use rich descriptive language that meshes with your character's implied background. Another great read!

~Red

aw...how touching. This is so sad. *sniff*I like the reference to flat cola. Very good descriptions, this is all very well written. I can't find fault in it. Very well done. Keep writing!~Nea

oh...this is really sweet...so it's like you have body dismorphic disorder? cheer up, you're beautiful...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...

truly yours...