I love it. It's a rare poem that receives that begrudged phrase from me, so appreciate it. Blah, blah, blah. I can never give constructive criticism to the poems I love, and besides, I'm exhausted from an entire hour of reviewing other people's poems. Please, take my word for it--this is an exceptional poem. Adieu Kat

aww totally sweet. and yeah love is worth it, definitely.- even if it doesn't last. and what's love without pain? it like just doesn'tw ork that way. good job

I liked the way you formatted it. I didnt understand it so clearly but it still flows well and looks good.