AW... that's really good!

Things are obviously looking up for you and this girl! That's wonderful!

This poem is very sweet because you've expressed your happiness very subtly and yet it's still obvious how happy you are...if that makes sense.

But this is wonderful!

Much Love,

S. A. Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

i am english i'm just a bad speller

anyway good poem thanks for the reviews they were honest

hope you enjoy pointing out the bad grammer and ** spelling i have shown in thie review

i would be very thankful for more review as not many peopel read my stuf i guess it could be the spelling :)

keep the poems comeing

A poem that brings a smile to my lips, and the image of rising spirits is well depicted. One mis-spelling in sprit, 6th line from the bottom, but otherwise, a powerful piece

You have such a powerful way with words. The images in your poems are so vivid and beautiful. Great work and thanks for your review.