   Holli-chan Stevens 2005-09-28 . chapter 3You've got a wonderful writing style. I've no idea why this story doesn't have a thousand reviews.
This story is hilarious, and is definitley one of my favorites. You separated your POV's well, used great descriptions, and overall made me laugh out loud. Keep it up!
--Holli! |
| Holli-chan Stevens 2005-09-28 . chapter 2 Great chappie. Bloody hilarious. Can't wait to read more.
--Holli! |
| Holli-chan Stevens 2005-09-28 . chapter 1 LOL! I love the second-to-last line. 'They hadn't even gotten his tombstone right.' Oh my gosh, I love your sarcastic way of writing things. Your sumarry just intrigued by... 'kind of died?' What does that mean? I guess I'll have to keep on reading... Toodles!
--Holli! |
| Esquirella 2005-09-12 . chapter 3 Cute concept. Confused at the end of this chapter, but I'm sure any questions will be answered in upcoming chapters. |
| Boogyoogy 2005-09-08 . chapter 3 um a bit confusing... |
| Boogyoogy 2005-09-07 . chapter 1 This seems like an awesome story please continue... it seems like it will be very good... i can't think of anything else to say... PLEASE CONTINUE! lol |
| suthing 2005-09-07 . chapter 1 A slowly becoming twist at the end. Well enjoyed. Continue writing. :) |
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