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| Glorio 2005-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is a good idea to finish it rachelahamens, but this piece is also very good, you write with passion, that is very respectable. |
| Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseOh I love this. I've been on that long flight between America and England, save I was with the love of my life--my hubby. Thanks for the review and the kind words about my pen name! Today I really needed to be reminded of that poem I wrote so long ago, cause I need to get back to the war. Another thing--I'm writing a series of fan fiction based on the Law & Order universe. This poem fits into that story and I was wondering if you could let me use it. It would probably be for a quote to start a chapter (which I use instead of titles). Or the main character might even hear this song on one of the listening channels on the airplane. Either way, you'd be credited!! -Kat |
| WritingforJesus 2005-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseNO! This is NOT cheesy! I loved it and I'm putting it on my favorites list! YAY! Good job friend! - W4J |
| asha lie lee 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abusei really love the chorus even though iz all simple words, its so powerful. i can feel true emotion behind it and thats insane like so amazing especially in the part of the some that repeats, usually iz just like 2 lines that get to yougreat job-asha |
| simpleplan13 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuseim in a long distance relationships so i can completely relate...great job |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI don't think it's cheesy at all. I think lotsa people think that when they're homesick or person-sick, but they just never express their feelings like that. ~happy writing~ |
| Laurie Stevenson 2005-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse"uplifting" oh the irony!man this guy above is hilarious Loved the song finding the tune is the fun bit |
| elvenstorm 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abuseHehe very cute, well done is nice to see something uplifting. |