I love the feeling you give here. Usually poems of this sort aren't so specific ("In twelve fragile months") but I'm not saying they shouldn't be. I can definately relate to the idea...great work.

I love how the piece starts with one simple word, standing alone as a sentence. It's ..strange. But absorbing. Nice job :)

I like those last three lines... great poem

this is great...love is not the word for it...well done. lots of love ~AC~