very cool, I really like Stephanie and her attitude. There were a few mistakes in the first paragraph that could be fixed, but once i got past that part I didn't see much else wrong. I hope you update soon, it's great.

That is brilliant. yet again...

waiting for the next chapetr!!

This is going to be great. I can't wait for the next chpater. Plz come out with it ASAP. ^.~~Ana~

Cheyea! I have to learn some of those dance moves. Yups, great story and update soon!~

Itz BRIL so far...i want 2 read more, update real quick!

this is really good so far. i never thought you'd update and i pretty much forgot about this story. but so far it's very intriguing. i like the interaction between jason and stephanie in the very last sentence. keep it up and update soon!

I really enjoyed my time reading this, good detail. I'll be hoping to see more in the future. ^_^

this is really interesting. I like it alot I can't wait to read more...umm, that song "I'm sorry" by Twisted is that real group, or did you write the song? If you wrote the song it is so awesome..lol, so you gotta tell me! And finish the story! lol

I absolutely adore this...the song was amazing, i loved the way you've added 4 different languages together.

Wow...amazing, update soon!

This is the story of my life! People don't realize how much racism still goes on today. Sometimes I can even mention liking guys of another race and people are like 'what but he's not your skin color why do you like him?' It's disappointing to say the least because you can have all sorts of race friends but when it comes down to the nitty-gritty in relationships people tell you to 'stick to your own color.' I hope the heroine in your story makes it out alright. Great job!~

A couple of errors were found in the first two paragraphs. 1) The use of "their" is incorrect. You may try rewriting those sentences so they don't contain any pronouns whatsoever. I saw that you were trying to conceal the gender of the spectator, and I think that's interesting. 2) As a psychology major, I must tell you that schizophrenia is *not* the same as having multiple personalities. Multiple personality disorder is actually a form of amnesia. Anyways, keep writing! =)

Very interesting. Seems like a good story. Keep updating. ~Rachel