Wow, dude, I really like the rhyme scheme! Much brilliance, I see. (...Yoda much? lol)

I especially liked these two lines:

'Time rushing at the speed of sound.While you try desperately to slow down.'

*nods* Very awesome.

Just one thing, though. And this is just me.

This line:

'Forgetting what is in-between.' When I read it, I just thought it would sound better if you said, 'Forgetting what lies in-between.' I dunno why. xD I think it would work either way.

Great job on the poem! I like the meaning behind it.

Keep writing!

i can relate to the times in life where you feel just alone and isolated from the world~~ Good rhyming and flow in this~~

keep writing!