You must be getting sick of me reviewing you by now, but I just adore your work. ] Another fantastic poem - the first line really draws you in, and the last one's a killer.

catchy first line ;)

Oh, wow. . very nice! I really like your work-keep it up!

you wrote this in geo? that must've been fun! :D I could never write a poem during school hours, I just can't concentrate enough. but this was really well done. it reminds me of coldplay for some reason? not sure why. I love the first line too.