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| Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscu... 2006-10-29 ch 5,  | abuseGah... so long since you updated... I'm almost glad I just found it now... Yeah, I just recently got hooked on this... series? Meh, anyway, It's awsome! Please update soon! ~Soleil |
| Naomi 2006-10-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseThere's a bit where Chro and Viktor are talking, and Chro brings up Viktor liking Theoron. Anyway, you put Theo insted of Viktor, lookit : 'Theoron sighed and closed his eyes. "In a way, yes. It bothers me to no end, that I like my own cousin"' Voila! hehe. i love this story so much...i might have to poke you on dA to write more hehe ;) |
| will 2006-08-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseok- not cool- u need to tell me and EVERYONE ELSE the ending! thats not nice to leave such a HUGE CLIFFHANGER! oh well- i love the story- continue soon please- i miss it already- and i finished it like 2 minuts ago! :'( - wIlL |
| will 2006-07-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseagain- this is way good- but another again- Y DO YOU KEEP STOPPING AT HORRIBLE PLACES?!?!?!1/1 its ok tho- i like the suspence- and jol is the best(hes just so... yea) any ways- gotta read more my head is gonna pop if i dont- will |
| will 2006-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseok- still love ur... everything but i just dont see y u would END IT RITE HERE?!?!?!?!?! OMG- this is the biggest turn of anything in my life... my LIFE! oh- ill gonna read the other chapters now- ttfn- WiLl |
| Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2006-02-17 ch 4, | abuseuh-oh! haha! go Prince and Princess! lol |
| Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2006-02-17 ch 3, | abuseViktor is dirty! Filthy-minded little... LOL! He is so evil! Lol! Cute chapter! |
| Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2006-02-17 ch 2, | abuseHaha! Poor Chro! Having to deal with those two while Jol goes out on a date! Aww, Theoron is so kawaii! Who am I kidding, they're ALL kawaii!! |
| Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusethey switched again! they might as well be twins! argh! lol! jk! Aww... Jol blushed! Ja, I must read more! |
| Armageddon 2006-02-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseHey Ronda!I was so busy lately, I don't even check my dA accout anymore... T_T I havn't forgotten to correct everything though! Since I have nothing to do at work sometimes, I'll start from chapter 1 this week, I already did chapter 10 some time ago... But YAY! you will finish this story right?! :D Can't wait to read the rest.. have fun writing it till then! |
| FeatherJunkie 2006-02-01 ch 5, | abuseNO, I DON'T FORGIVE YOU. Okay, I do. You're going to rewrite the whole thing? Well, good luck, and if there's ever anything I can do to help you out... I like that word. Backflash. Flashback, backflash. Lol, I remember when you were still Ronda Ponda... But now you're going to eliminate the 'Ronda' altogether? Aw. ^__^ Well, hope to see something new soon... |
| Green Eyed Pixie 2006-01-27 ch 5, | abuse-cries- I so thought that was an update -_-. So very misleadinbg. But im glad you're going to update soon! -smiles madly- |
| Rachizzle 2006-01-25 ch 5, anon. | abuse-.- I can't believe you, lmao |
| Oona-ee 2005-12-03 ch 4, | abuseAHAHAHA!.. i mean.. aww.. poor Chro and Jol.. :Dvery interesting ending for the chapter.. now.. all you gotta do is .. UPDATE!! xD |
| Miss-Nina 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really great story your have! I like the plot, and you use a lot of good vocab words, too. Wow, I've never seen a chapter so long, but it was interesting (not boring) at the same time. It's a little confusing in parts, but besides that I love your story. Maybe I'll be back for chapter two and check up with the updates. ^_^ nina-chan |