Shorter than your usual, but still piercing.

repeditive for sure.but hidden messages, hidden not?

blood can only show what we canno cry out on the outside.

I cna relate to this. You write it very well and I always love the structure of your poetry.

Keep it up.

i love how younever specify for the lack there-of what...it leaves sweetly blank. to fill in yourself, from your own personnal experiences...nice job.

Very beautiful, 'spider-web silhouette' sounds so lovely.

Keep it up.

What a sad ending. I liked this collection. It was very powerful and thought-provoking.

Wow. I liked the bluntness of it. Very good.

Reality is harsh sometimes, yes. I like the Mother Mary metaphors.

There were so many good lines in this poem. Very clever, very original. This was my favorite in this collection so far.

So simple, but so expressive. Very good.

This was really good, too. " then the ballerina put her cliches down with her slippers at night, and, finally, she can dance." Excellent.

This was really good. I like how it's just one big rolling poem.

seems so very delicate indeed.

silhouettes into the wind.

You leave me shaking.

This one seems kind of angry to me, short but angry.

Keep it up.