This is so beautiful. It's pure genious, I love it. ToTaLlY aWeSoMe!

beautiful.. there's no other word that can describe

This poem is really good. I didn't know that you were such a good writer. I also didn't know you were romantic. I now have to ask why Jordan dumped you.

Aw...that is so sweet!

Aw. That's so bittersweet. I could relate is it was vice versa (from female's point of view). Great job.

beautiful. i love the honest, simple lines in this and the emotions too like frustration, helplessness and others. AWESOME ending. i like it that u ended with a question mark. its suitable for this. great job:-)

Your poem had a good start, simple and direct... in the second stanza i think you mean "Your beauty takes away my breath." The phrasing is kinda awkward, but i guess it suits the subject of the poem. Keep writing!

I feel so perceptive! Dude. Again, awesome poem. Glad you're happy? (hoping she doesn't do something incredibly stupid) and such.:)