Ah. A home... how comfortable it is to be in something so warming. Yo! You can use my ideas, it's no biggie. ^^ When I give ideas on the review, TAKE IT! Why else would I put it there. Anywho, I kinda made a mistake when I said your characters are equal. The cool.

Dude, or dudette, you are a natural writer. I can find this fiction to be very interesting. And speaking of memories, this chapter is as if I was there myself; as if it was a memory. I'm trying to stop my anxiety from going to the next chapter so you'll hear more of me.

Kitty Powa! :3

Where there are obvious questions, there are obvious answers. This is supernatural! Make a three headed lion appear.

Nice wordings on this fic. I may say, though, that Marisol has that kind of attitude a cheerleader has when she finds out she didn't make the team. (Snickers) Your characters are all almost equal. Give them a sprinkle of surprise and see what you get.