   OneLastEndeavor 2005-10-05 . chapter 1very sad, and nicely touches on the hurricane victims. beautifully done. |
 A Phantom Stranger 2005-09-23 . chapter 1Strange poem...beautiful in a way...unfortunately beautiful I guess you could say...its a pity isnt it...that pain always writes beautiful words |
| Princess-anna57 2005-09-22 . chapter 1 Excellent work. Well written.
Keep writing!
~Anna~ |
| Luthiena o Lorien 2005-09-08 . chapter 1 Aw, this is so sweet. Let us all keep them in our prayers. |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 2005-09-07 . chapter 1 All I can say is WOW!
Kira Jocilyne Bouviea` |
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