 NekoKaigara 2009-09-12 . chapter 12Great fiction. I'm loving Jon more and more.Update soon |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 12Cute ending. Sad about Hannele and May though. I was kind of hoping they'd hit it off. |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 11Oh, I was looking forward to Caleb coming back into the picture. Exciting stuff. |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 10Loved this chapter; It was adorable. Matt has a pretty cool mum. Jealous =3 |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 9Morning! I love these guys. They're so much like my own school friends =3 I'm surprised Matt didn't get suspicious when Jon had his arm around Corin's neck, though. Or was it in a different position to how I imagined? It was hard to tell. |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 4I really love your characters.
Anyway, reading the rest tomorrow :) |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 3'But if I’d known how the day would turn out I would have been a lot more excited.'
That line sort of killed this chapter for me. It gave too much away.
Asides from that, I really liked it. It looks like I'll be bumping your reviews up to '200' |
 Xephia 2009-07-31 . chapter 1I'll be honest. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, and some sentences don't flow as well as they could. A little more description wouldn't hurt either.
However, there are a few things that really appeal to me with this story so far. First of all, the main character - he's not only gay, but a little camp too. I really like that, he's very likable and realistic. The contrast between him and Jon is really appealing as well. I like most of your dialog and it was definitely a very strong opening chapter.
Kudos. I'm looking forward to more. |
 ella3114 2009-06-13 . chapter 12Great story!
It's so gayish!
Lol.
Actually I have been looking forward for a happy ending.
Like,when they graduated and then bla-bla-bla...
But overall,it is still a great story |
 CemelDosce 2009-06-03 . chapter 2Matt's a complete and utter psycho...i LOVE him!... Great story so far...and Jon is just too sweet. |
 frogs of war 2009-05-16 . chapter 11:"another murderess glare" murderous. Jessica could have given the other kind, but Jon couldn't.
Here a plain pizza comes with peperoni.
I just have to say: I love Matt.
6:"are you read yet? ready
I guess Billy kept trying to change who Corin was (at the concert) so he's probably better off without him. And Kevin could use a little attention.
I think this is my favorite 'go to pick up the sister, but take the brother out' story and I wrote one. |
 Sarah's State of Grace 2009-02-15 . chapter 12Very awesome story! Please write more soon! =) |
 Caisele 2009-01-30 . chapter 12AWn
this is awesome. you should win an award, or like a hat (lol)
write more! |
 Caisele 2009-01-30 . chapter 5LOVE! |
 Caisele 2009-01-29 . chapter 3OMG i love this! no lies. i do i do i do XD |