|Reviews for Speaking in Sentences|
| KatieBobb 11/16/12 . chapter 12
Oh, that was an abrupt end and I'm sad it's over :( But it was so wonderful!
| KatieBobb 11/16/12 . chapter 1
Oh, but I am in love with these boys already, lol.
| Nuitdemeztli 7/27/12 . chapter 12
| Ibbit 6/16/12 . chapter 12
This was cute, though rather spastic. The characters all seem the same in a sorta way. They are very ADD and have the same sort of humor (which, yeah, that's common among friends but sheesh) and ect. There was some grammar/spelling issues, but nothing too distracting. All in all, it was good and I could read your sense of writing very well. Good job :]
Luck writing and with life stuffs. ibbit
| Aria657 7/18/11 . chapter 12
Is it sad that I think May and Hanelle would actually make a pretty cute couple? What happened to Billy though, isn't he still their friend? I saw Kevin and Corin happening though, they are so cute together! Kevin actually reminds me of myself. His books and hating everybody (my friends say I do, I do hate a lot of people...) I really loved it! But why did Joey just stop being his best friend, I don't understand that, because he really liked Jessica, or was he pretending the whole time? If you could just clear that up for me, it would be appreciated! (Ooh, big word!) :) And Jon and Matt are adorable, I love Matt's mom. :)
| artemisia90 3/31/11 . chapter 12
very cute and happy! thank god ! but what happened to Corin ex boyfriend? and why was Joey pissed at matt?
| creativesmarts 1/27/11 . chapter 12
| SeaJade Song 12/30/10 . chapter 12
the entire time i read this story i could not stop laughing :).
| bs49184 11/26/10 . chapter 8
| midnight to dusk 10/15/10 . chapter 12
haha cute and funny :) it could be proofread maybe once or twice more (because of the occasional confusing sentence) BUT I LOVE IT x)
| doublestandard 8/24/10 . chapter 12
l love this! :D
lt is amazing.
Corin and Kevin got together! :D l knew they would. They are perfect.
l love Matt. His thoughts are funny. ;)
Jon is to cute! :)
| Minlou 8/9/10 . chapter 12
Ok, so I just read this entire story in one sitting because although I started at about 1:45 in the morning and told myself I was just going to *skim* the first chapter I got caught up in the humor and the plot and the charming (for the most part) characters.
I'm glad Matt's parents were accepting of him, wish John's could've been as well, still he ended up somewhere better anyway.
| ForgottenTales 8/7/10 . chapter 12
The beginning was hilarious. Matt was crazy and totally insane. :D And Jon was so cute! LOLz it was amusing to read.
Later chapeters though, were kinda tiresome, cause everyone got siller and siller.
| frolic-horror 8/4/10 . chapter 12
Your writing is good and I loved the characters but the story seemed to me to kind of lack a real plot. After Jon got together with Matt the whole thing turned into a teenage melodrama with the characters just being funny and weird and cute. Yet again, the scenes and characters were fun to read, but I almost gave it up because there was no plot - no something that is happening/needs to happen and to which purpose you need to present the characters. I had to read it like a "slice of life" manga where they just show off some characters and their lives with no further reason. As such it was very good.
| Lunaric Sol 6/15/10 . chapter 12
Hmm, this was really very good. Its full of witty humor, clever situations, and, best of all, gay people! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.