I was like "WHOA WHOA WHAO" the whole time I read this chapter LOL. It moved so extremely fast. He took Jon under his wing without batting an eye. How bizarre! But I totally loved it. You have some really clever lines in there. It's super fun to read. Hilarious! Great job.

Really cool ending to an awesome story. I'm glad Kevin and Corin ended up together.

'Hello, can I grope you now? Oh, I'm sorry, is that my hand on your ass?'
Goddamn, this story is totally awesome but that quote just pushed it over the edge of incredibleness.

THAT IS HILARIOUS! Omg MandIE is a total slut! (sorry for the lang) that was so funny when he said, "So, Caleb, is that your hand on my knee?" I laughed so hard! XD

Well that was fricking awesome first attempt! Poor Corin! God! Jon is even CUTER when he is jealous! omg I can't get enough of this story! XD

o.m.g! I absoulutely love this story! It is so hilarious! Jon is so cute and Matt is so...gay-ish but is a very good way! XD Matt is really funny too! I love Corin too! :)

AW that story was so cute! and short dammit, i really wish it was longer :( all good things must end, eh? I wonder who Hanneles boyfriend is...

Lmao, my friend once got the 'boxer or brief' question on truth of dare jenga once(yea, lame, we know) she answered boxers, bur that started this whole conversation about boxer snobs(people who only wear boxers) and brief snobs(people who only wear briefs). I guess Matt is a boxer snob and Jon isn't a snob at all. Yay Jon!

But all of that aside I liked the line you're speaking in sentences, actually i liked the whole thing, but that line was great. And the 'Most Random thing ever done' award. And I can't actually think of any constructive criticism.

Cheerio!

This was really great! Thanx for giving me the pleasure of reading this! Jon sounds uber coot! Wait... Hannele has a boyfriend? Lol! She seems too evil for anyone but May to be with!

yay that was so funny! lol i loved it!

Loved this story it was just so cute! I loved Jon he's just adorable! The story was great!

I loved this story! :D I'm so glad everything worked out, and the comedy present in this was hilarious. ^-^

Great job!
-Desinere.

Ahh! First chapter and I already love it! ^_^

It's just so cute,I don't have words!

I LOVE IT! I'm sorry, am I scaring you now? I just loved the story so much. Bye.