i luv the story keep up the good work and give me more gore ^:^

Much love on this piece. This works fantastically as a stand alone.

-Inu Hearts You-

Hey, babe! I finally got an account here whoo! Anyways, we're studying horror in creative writing and I thought I'd look you up and see what you had written and this was just the example I needed. I had a girl in my class come read it and she was absolutely horrified. I wondered, "Am I a horrible person for not being affected--at all?" And what does that say about you, eh? ^_~ More to the point, I really like this story. Go you!

This is good stuff! I love the character and I hope you carry on with this story because it's strangely fascinating. Nice one!