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Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt 2005-09-08 ch 1,	abuse(raises eyebrows) Hm... emotion, but not a very well-portrayed plot. The flow of the words isn't the best and I just think it's kind of... well, the whole revenge thing doesn't do a thing for me.
Coping Mechanism 2005-09-08 ch 1,	abusesick and twisted...nice! lol There was one line I couldn't derive any sense out of though... "And fatser if your silent" Did that mean something or was that just a typo?