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| Reviews for Jock Smarts |
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   mia aurora 7/21/12 . chapter 23aww so simple yet for sharing the story :) |
| purplebutterfly2 6/10/12 . chapter 23 all in ll this was a very good story :) but it had 1 glitch it was a little rushed like everything was happening too fast but other than that i liked it it was a fun quick read :D |
| Simone Von Kugelgen 4/26/12 . chapter 23 It needs work... I like the idea, and I like te characters, but there is mistakes and the story just seems kind of dry, you know? You use WAY too many commas. I think that if you were to go through the story and fix the little punctuation mistakes and add more detail and meat to the story, then I think it'll be really good! Don't hate me for giving a bad review, it's just that I have OCD when it comes to that. I liked the idea though! |
| Simone Von Kugelgen 4/26/12 . chapter 23 It needs work... I like the idea, and I like te characters, but there is mistakes and the story just seems kind of dry, you know? You use WAY too many commas. I think that if you were to go through the story and fix the little punctuation mistakes and add more detail and meat to the story, then I think it'll be really good! Don't hate me for giving a bad review, it's just that I have OCD when it comes to that. I liked the idea though! |
| Gamista 4/10/12 . chapter 13 Random: You certainly can use my comment. My friend and I used little codes like that for a lot of different countries. She was always fascinated with Australians, however. Happy Reading! Gamista |
| Random 4/10/12 . chapter 13 I am an Australian and I was so amused by the marsupial comment. I have never been described like that... hmmm can I use it? |
| FLIPPER66 1/29/11 . chapter 22 UP TO THIS POINT A VERY GOOD STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT FOLLOWING CHAPPY'S/ JUST HOPE THAT PLOTS OF REVENGE BACKFIRE ON THE PERPETRATORS. |
| twilight121 11/8/09 . chapter 7 Hey, I haven't read all of it, but so far, SO good! :-) I gotta go, my computer is about to die on me. Keep on writing! |
| mush-mush 1/23/07 . chapter 22 i read this entire story, and you really need to update and soon. |
| Alenor 5/15/06 . chapter 22 uh oh! what are those horrible girls gonna do? |
| Awaiting-Life's-Beginning 5/10/06 . chapter 22 oh dear sounds like trouble to me but i wanna know what happens |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 5/10/06 . chapter 22 hey gurl..loved it..this is the end of the chapter..and no more..i wanna know what going to happens then...well anyways going to head out then...peace out gurl...bye-bye then...:D... |
| Alenor 3/30/06 . chapter 21 great story so far, can't wait for the end, cya later. |
| queen-lala 2/28/06 . chapter 21 aww how sweet. update soon_ |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 2/28/06 . chapter 21 i just hope that amy would be okay though..anyways so loving it..can't wait the next chapter to update..anyways going to head out then...so peace out gurl...bye-bye then... |
