   sarah1491 2006-01-28 . chapter 1THis is so amazing~ |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-11-15 . chapter 1 Beautiful poem. An epic piece on human suffering,struggle,and love. How we wander on this plain known as eternity in search of happiness and through it all,if we're luck,we find it. Very nicely written again. |
| someday-i-will 2005-10-01 . chapter 1 Wow..I realised that I hadn't reveiwed you in a long while and came to read this. It was really amazing, so sad and powerful, I love it! |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-09-27 . chapter 1wow... i'm near tears at the moment~ a wonderful poem about sadness and then hope and the promise of a better tomorrow~ great job!
keep writing! |
| emily 2005-09-27 . chapter 1 i have had no credit lately ive got a new email address its emilyrachel18@hotmail.com ive lost urs could u email it 2 me? i hope ur ok!btw excellant poem |
| Eboniccinderella 2005-09-26 . chapter 1 This is a beautiful story-poem,I wonder if there is a word for it.You're very descriptive,which think is key,and keep the same tone,calm and waiting,throughout the poem.Two thumbs up. |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-09-18 . chapter 1 Hi,
Wow. I'm speechless. That is SO amazingly good. It's so sweet!! I love it, if only love could always be so tender...
write on,Em |
| Moonjava 2005-09-16 . chapter 1 Really great writing. I like it. |
| putz-6 2005-09-13 . chapter 1 This is awsome like always. I love it great job ^_^ |
| emily 2005-09-12 . chapter 1 i wasn't amazed by the beggining but the more i read the more the depth of this poem astounded me! I asked you once to write a happy poem. I think you have achieved an astounding poem by combinig both sorrow and love i can only hope to become as good as you now! |
| Rozlin 2005-09-10 . chapter 1 wow! so powerfully beautiful! good job putting this into words! |
 in theory 2005-09-10 . chapter 1Holy.wow. I was deeply moved by this, what more can I say. Beautiful, beautiful. |
 lackluster 2005-09-09 . chapter 1heartbreaking, but beautiful also. amazing. |
| Suicidal_Greeting 2005-09-09 . chapter 1 Wow babe.
Well this is amazing I have to say. Definately one of your best.
It reminds me a lot of my boyfriend and I and how he saved me from the dark.
Very well done.
Much Love-->Suicidal_Greeting |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-09-09 . chapter 1 Beautiful! The description and the flow of the poem was perfect. One of my favourite poems ever. I love the description of the rain. The ending is also very well done.
Keep it up. |
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