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Reviews For: Let Me Write You a Song

Raquedan
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abuseUsually, I'm not into poetry (or "songs") but I like your style of melodrama. I like "So let the final stone be cast / Because I loved you". Very cool. I know you're not supposed to do this, but my email hates me, so I'm gonna reply to your email here.

I like reviewing while the author's online too. Sort of like instant messenger. Not that I ever use instant messenger. Go look again, I've stopped fiddling with the chapters and I actually wrote stuff in my profile. My fanfiction.net profile is better, but I use that account more, so...yeah, check that out. I get the thing with the lawn gnomes. I think you should buy (or, you know, somehow aquire) a bunch of lawn gnomes, and a bunch of flamingoes, and just re-landscape people's front yards. Because everyone knows that ** with your neighbors is the best crack ever. Get off the pink leotard, it's just an object, it doesn't mean what you think. I could have said "Where are my fig newtons?" Same thing. Thanks for your reviews, I really never expected anyone to read that crap. -Raq
Frodo13
2005-09-09
ch 1,
abusewow...that was really good. =)

by the way...thanks so much for reviewing my stuff! the whole away message story came from my friends away message that said,"blah." heh...didn't know people would actually like it that much.

thanks again for the reviews! =)

talk to you soon,-kelly
maxnotevoltage
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is very powerful and full of emotion. I love the poetry! Well-spoken. You've mastered the art. -- J.max
Nacilme
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abuseAww, this is so sweet. I love the rhyming, it's such a beautiful poem. And it works just as well as a song.
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