Oh, I absolutely LOVED this! It's such a cute story.
I even found it somewhat comical near the end: "What is this? What is going on?"
You should definitely write more of these random pieces, JAIA; they're lovely! :D

WHATS GOING ON?Keep writing.

Great one shot, though I think maybe a little more could be added about the people in it. Just add a bit more character to them. But it's great just the same, especially the line 'my heart leaping with the cadence of your voice'. Awesome! Blessed be from Learah!