Quite a sensual, sexual poem, if interpreted in a Freudian way. The last line is really...orgasmic. Very beautiful metaphors (as usual...)

NIce metaphor.. I might rate it M though

I love the sensory details, subtle and nicely done.

lovely descriptions, and overall amazing poem. i love it.

Wow.. I love this! It's marvelous! Vivid imaginary and unusual comparisions. Good job, I can't wait to read more from you.

I love the description. Very interesing comparisons. Seems like quite the encounter to have.