The pureness and simplicity is breathsnatching, I loved reading this. And your bio amused me :P

oh wow... the DELICACY of this, the tripping stumbling beauty & fragility... it is actually perfect. which is quite scary.

I love how this has end rhyme, but everything flows together into one long statement, not separate sentences. This is so heartbreaking. Wonderful job. Keep writing! :)

Short and absolute. Excellent work.

wow, so sad.I kinda feel this way now.I miss you, my friend.JohnTrue@excite.com

so pretty so sad so delicate, tender , a whirlwind pearl blend of sweet and bitter emotions. i just love it. "petal-laced" and the ending line is just so simple and yet so powerful.

Aww. Sweet and sad. Odd how that works out, isn't it? This rings softly of the hurt indifference causes... Wonderful imagery, beautifully captured emotions. Very well written.

thats beautiful

This was... aching.

So hauntingly beautiful and terrible at the same time.

I love your descriptions. Always.

very cool.. short and great.. the whole concept is really original & cool

That is beautiful...very discriptive and powerful. The images are very rich and fresh in detail. This is great work. Keep writing, Katja.

So beautiful. I love it. :D Simple and perfect.

This is amazing, the whole piece is indescribably beautiful.

Much love,Juliet.