That totally blew me away...just the description and the detail...wow. I've felt like that once or twice...including right now. Loved that part in your profile about fp being a community! I believe that too!

~DM

P.S Check out my poem called "Chain of Broken Hearts". Somehow I think you'll identify...just a suggestion! ^.^

Oh, wow this hit me really hard. Beautiful and way better that my lil piece.

Oh, the imagery. I was trying to pick a favorite line, but I can't find just one...there are way too many.

Don't know how i skipped over this beforebut..I get itand Amen

Words and hurt can sting,But fire burns.So set me aflame.

I loved those lines. The poem itself was emo-cliche-ish though still heartfelt, however those three lines I qouted *made* this poem. I totally loved that part and con completely relate. -aspen

I...wow...I have no words. This was amazing.

i can totally relate to this. Great work!

Simply amazing. I picture a warm cozy room, and a fireplace, obviously, yet the action that's taking place totally undermines it. This poem is tragically sadistic - a hard combination to mix, but you did it nonetheless. Great job!

--Kelayne--

OMG!! this was so awesome! ...i know this feeling...just... too .. well.

You changed your name but let's get on topic. This is hard core, touching. Whatever anyone calls this, it is SERIOUSLY DEEP. I can actually visualize this and it is NOT a pretty sight.

"I am a porcelain doll.

You cracked my face."

I can taste the anger. Excellent job.

wow. this is beautiful. you made pain beautiful. amazing. truely amazing. keep writing.

(:(:(: Merry Chrismas and Peace Out :):):)

Gorgeous imagery.

Ooh... That's so sad! But I think very true with so many of us.

Thanks for the review, by the way. Glad you enjoyed it! ^^;

That was a little scary and a little to...well...harsh? I don't know if that's the word. I wonder WHO you are talking about in all of these poems?