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Reviews For: betty bell, london bridge
do not resuscitate 2006-08-18 . chapter 1
i love this. the last lines are so haunting. beautiful.
HellHeartedlyBent 2006-06-26 . chapter 2
that was silly-beautiful. keep it up
the naked civil servant 2006-01-28 . chapter 1
.o.h.m.y.g.o.d.y.e.s.how perfect? i am so ** obsessed with murder :| thank god someone shares my addiction - giving names never really helps. beautiful and painful. excellence, in screaming.
sarah1491 2006-01-26 . chapter 1
You seem to use a rhythm in your poetry. When I'm writing, I canh always hear a rhythm in mine too (well, most of the time). I like the emotion you had in here. Very nice. :)
ayadora 2006-01-21 . chapter 1
Wow. Ouch.
hey maria 2005-10-14 . chapter 1
Feels like music; it flows so well Love the images this brings to mind. The las line is my favorite - so powerful, so intriguing. Sadly, I don't understand this poem, but it's beautiful nonetheless. It has this haunting, other-wordly quality to it and it's so very unforgettable.
smile persephone 2005-09-10 . chapter 1
This is gorgeous. Love the imagery, it's slightly haunting and mysterious. The beginning three stanzas are just wowamazing.
lackluster 2005-09-09 . chapter 1
you wrote such a magnificent story in just this one poem, and so beautifully tragic. i mean, it's just awe-worthy.

i love the ending stanzas, they feel more lyrical in a way. amazing.
Nothing Profound 2005-09-08 . chapter 1
I do not really understand it, but there is something about it that I simply love. This is very well-written, and I like the comparison with the antique photograph. Nice job.
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