first off, i have to thank you for one of the most interesting murder cases i've ever read.
secondly, your piece is so amazing
"so young and so impure-
honestly, we all know.
yes, everyoneinthisroom knows whose faultitis."
,,that's so fantastic in its eerie fashion.
great great job.

Spent all English I should've been editing reading up on Mary Bell. I watched a remake of her story on Law and Order once, but the truth is so much more interesting. And sad. Murder makes me sad, you know? Not in a bawling way, or even in a frown way. Just in a...I can't explain it, not at all. Maybe I'll write a poem about it someday, since I'm beginning to feel that's what they're for, and that's what you did here.

I pictured marching people in my head, with pitches and fitch forks. They had an anthem, and it was peppy, but everyone cried.

Jules

i love this. the last lines are so haunting. beautiful.

that was silly-beautiful. keep it up

.o.h.m.y.g.o.d.y.e.s.how perfect? i am so ** obsessed with murder :| thank god someone shares my addiction - giving names never really helps. beautiful and painful. excellence, in screaming.

You seem to use a rhythm in your poetry. When I'm writing, I canh always hear a rhythm in mine too (well, most of the time). I like the emotion you had in here. Very nice. :)

Wow. Ouch.

Feels like music; it flows so well Love the images this brings to mind. The las line is my favorite - so powerful, so intriguing. Sadly, I don't understand this poem, but it's beautiful nonetheless. It has this haunting, other-wordly quality to it and it's so very unforgettable.

This is gorgeous. Love the imagery, it's slightly haunting and mysterious. The beginning three stanzas are just wowamazing.

you wrote such a magnificent story in just this one poem, and so beautifully tragic. i mean, it's just awe-worthy.

i love the ending stanzas, they feel more lyrical in a way. amazing.

I do not really understand it, but there is something about it that I simply love. This is very well-written, and I like the comparison with the antique photograph. Nice job.