You're really improving in your writing, I didn't see any mistakes in tenses, couldn't find any typos, or anything like that. The story is moving at a decent pace, and is still engaging. Please continue soon.

Another great chappie! ^^ I loved it!

Great chapter! I haven't been here in awhileOo I should get busy>< Anyways, update soon^^

Good chapter. Parents just won't listen. Oh, sorry my story here is taking so long; I'm having trouble with it. Update soon.

You still have problems with tense switching, what tense are you trying to put this story into?

"Mandy, Dave and Alex go their separate ways. But Alex had forgotten to mention to the two that he had detention after school." Again you have evidence of both present and past tense in a single line, first sentence is in present tense and second is in past. You also have all the said's and asked's in past tesne but certain actions like "The bell rings and everyone gets up and heads off to class." in present tense, although there is less tense switching then before.

What is your plan B?

GREAT CHAPTER ^^ UPDATE SOON!

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed, didn't know you posted yet. But I love it all the same. You are so good with werewolf stories! I wish I had your talent. I should be updayeing my story here in about two days. Update soon!

fairly interesting, but you still have problems with your tenses,"The principle then dismissed Alex. He walks outside of the office to see a boy waiting for him."/\ In that line you have both a past and a present tense, if you wanted to make it past tense it would go something like:"The principle then dismissed Alex. He walked outside the office and saw a boy waiting for him."Or something to that extant. There are more instances where you switch tenses. I know you are trying, but try to go over it before posting, or have someone else go over the story for you. That's my advice at least.

HELLO! That was a great chapter ^^ UPDATE SOON! Or I will send my wolves after you lol. COME MY PRETTYS FEAST ON THIS HUMAN! lol see ya

Were you by any chance a Game Master before? If not, you set the scene very well, and you get straight to the point.

The past/ present tense in the beginning was confusing, but the story seems to have an interesting enough plot.

I like all the little hints that there's something not quite right with the town and its denizens.

he killed his father, but i never told you that. anyway, keep going on this story... it looks pretty good so far, with all the foreshadowing and all. and the girl and her friends are freakish... i think the guy who warned him is abnormal! is he is he is he?

a thing you could fix with your story are the changes between tenses. in the first few sentences of the story, the story is in present tense, but then it starts mixing in with past. it would help to clear that up.

sam

Wow! I like the story so far...but..why did you stop *cries* its good very good ^^ Update!! pwlease..I will give you a cookie *hands you a cookie, then takes it back* MINE!