Nice addition. Looking forward to more.

~Twilight Starr~

I like that we get to hear so many point of views. Well done.

~Twilight Starr~

Great ending sentence. Good start. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~

This story is really interesting! You have to come back and write more please please please! I won't put it into my favorites if you are just going to drop it...
Quincy

PS I love how I think that being in my favorites is something special...jeez I'm pathetic :)

Poor Amelia...wait, I do that too. Nevermind. Anyways...This is a very good story so far! Keep up the good work! Update soon! =^-^=

Solid opening section; I appreciate your omission of unnecessary detail at this point. Though I can’t say much else till I’ve read further, I do find your style easy to read and entertaining so far. I hope to get to know your characters better later on through more detailed description. Finally, it fills me with relief to see more than a cookie-cutter semblance of a teenager – right now I’m reviewing only those authors on this page who have managed to avoid the typical teen stereotype.

And I love all Seraphina's hypothoses.

(How many fp.com authors believe in reviewing back? I’ve submitted 220 signed reviews on this site and have received less than half that in return. In conducting this experiment of mine, flames are anticipated, and constructive criticism is thirsted after)

this is the kind of story where you have to reread to understand, so please please update soon.

This is REALLY well done- bravo! I love the idea of them all writing in the notebook, though I'm beginning to get confused because there are so many of them. I'm sure I'll be able to tell them apart as the story progresses. Very nicely done, update soon!

I do hope you know that people from Asia aren't "oriental" - we're asian. It's kind of racist/offensive. You'd only call inanimate objects oriental. Not people.

Cool. A Filipina.

That was the first thing that came to my head, but anyway. Things come into my head a lot. Interesting cast -- I like the way you've made it that we can see their personalities right off the bat. But how do they look like?

Wil it be in journal form for the whole story? Here's to hoping you pull it off marvelously! I've heard it's quite difficult. I can't wait to see how the story develops!

Hmm... I'm interested to see where this'll go. Update. Please?

Well... that was rather interesting. :D A bit of crazyness here, a bit of crazyness there... are you planning on using the journal for the whole story?Eagerly awaiting more... Please update soon! :)

Heheh ... being a former Nellie girl (That's an all-girl, though not catholic school program), I'd have to say ...

Hey, some people were slutty, spoilt, rich, and everything you describe, and then some of us ...

Just ...

Weren't!

Haha. So. If this is the prologue, where's the rest of the story??:):)

sounds good

Being a former catholic school girl (Emphasis on the word former) myself, This sounds really good.Please update ASAP yay! *Huggles*